Our Pitch for Fluorescent Adolescent
This task allowed us to illustrate our ideas forward to the class, we also gained some much needed feedback from our peers which we will use to further develop and evolve our idea. On the whole our class thought the song choice was right which was a really positive outcome. As people our age are the preferred target audience it was comforting knowing that they enjoy the song and know it. Of course Arctic Monkeys are well know in the indie rock. Also performing this pitch made us think about some of our own criticism, for example some parts of the narrative didn't seem particularly good when read aloud, by self assessing our own work, it allowed us to build on our strengths. Our narrative was picked up on as it wasn't clear how the idea of our take on todays youth culture was an accurate depiction of the songs lyrics. At this point, we don't have any further developed narratives and therefore we must carry through with this for the time being. At the end we asked if there were any questions, this was when the narrative was brought up and i'm glad it was. It has made us thing about it in more detail.
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